Wednesday, March 9, 2016

Making Comparisons

When writing a piece, you have to be logical in your approach on relationships. How would you connect letters M to N or A to E? 

If you were talking to a friend, how do you outline your ideas about the best from a list? Essentially, you use "organizing relationship" words like "both" or "none" or "either" or "although" to distinguish texts.  

Somewhere in your claims, when you are talking about large-scale ideas that relate to you and other authors, you have to use these types of words within your speech--and hence, within your writing claims.  

The length, the depth, of which you make relationship claim is up to your purposes: both the thesis purpose and your subtopic purpose. In other words, if an idea is really, really, really, really, really, really important--you are going to expand on that relationship claim with lots of reasons and evidence. 

Some of the general actions you can take, as topic sentence claims:


1. Claim a point that more than one author has, and attribute that point to each author.
  • ex:  Both _______ and ________ .... |  All ______(three, four, five, ...) authors....

2. Claim one point of disagreement, and clarify each author's stance.
  • ex.:  Although __________ believes _________, ________ believes ___________.
  • ex.: _______ and ______ find state __________, yet ________ argues ________.

3. Claim a point agreed upon and one part of that point where two or more authors disagree.
  • ex.:  Both support _____________; however, _________ believes ________ and _______ counters that ___________.

4. What other relationships do you find between your sources/examples?  



Writing a Synthesis paragraph

  • What purpose do I want this paragraph to have?  (This is key: you are the writer, and you must realize that you control what type of point you want to make, especially in research.)
  • What relationship words do I need to use in my topic sentence claim and in my reasoning sentences?  
  • What is the best evidence to use from each source material? (Yes, cite a clear quote or provide a concise summary of the idea from each author. Again, the length of the evidence is dictated by purpose--your purpose.)
  • Organize your ideas before you write the paragraph*. Use a column chart, pull out a quote from each source that discusses the same subject matter.
    • Active Reading
    • Pre-writing 
    • Outline

[Some] Analytical Considerations

  • Similar theme? 
  • Similar thematic statement?
  • Similar theme but contrasting statement? 
  • Similar tone?
  • Similar illusion? 
  • Similar effects?
  • Similar characters
  • Similar diction? 

Writing Comparison [or Contrasting] Claims:
  • Use sentence combining techniques, including transitional/introductory phrases.

    • X and Y [analytical verb: symbolize /denote/connote/ satirize/ imply]  ____________
    • While X ________________, y ________________. 
    • There are _________________ similarities in the [images] of ____________ and ___________. 
    • ...and an infinite amount more

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